Feedback for treatment 2

 

1. Animation is good, simple and effective but must link to the song
2. Our target audience (girls) is a good idea as it is quite easy to do ---> will be able to make a great promotional package that is girly and fun
3. Using shadows is a good idea
4. Liked the colour scheme:  baby pinks/whites/neutral colours as it works with the theme that is girly, dainty and cute
5. Make sure there's a narrative that is carefree and not complex
6. The song should be sunny and cheerful ---> audience suggest the artist Ingred Michaelson
7. Use different locations to make it more interesting to watch
8. Glamorous
9. Could be a good idea to actually acknowledge the set in the music video:  could see the singer getting her makeup done, etc

This feedback has helped us as it has made me think about what can actually be done and what is not a good idea from an audiences point of view. Everyone liked the colour sceme so I am going to stick with that. It helps us reach out to our target audience as we can relate to them. We need to develop a clear and strong narrative as poeple didnt understand what it was about or what the real point of it was. Audience feedback helps us develop our idea and come to reality with what is actually reasonable to do.